The Change of Jack - Draft One
Jack is a senior high school student. Three days ago, he didn't do well on his exams, thanks to the high developed technology, his father received his record card soon after. Jack's father looked at Jack's report card concernedly. By his side, Jack stood quietly and did not want to explain why he got terrible grades. He did not have prepared well for the exam; instead, he played on-line games all nigh long before the exam. He didn't feel sorry until he saw a expression of disappointed on his father's face. From then on, he decided not fool around any more because he has found that he has fallen behind others too much. Then , he said to his father that he will switch into high gear to study harder, and let his parents be proud of him. His father seemed to be moved by his son's words.

4 Comments:
he decided not fool ...
he decided not to fool...
其他應該沒什麼錯
a expression要用an
大概就醬吧..
有一個report card有拼錯!
應該沒其他問題了!
找不到問題了耶
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