Thursday, April 26, 2007

Autobiogrophy 2 - draft one

When I was in elementary school, I used to be a member of rhythm band and I played Pianica. Therefore I got an instrument certificate of Pianica. Before graduating from school, we participated a music contest, fortunately, we got the champion. As the saying goes,” Where there is a will, there is a way.”, we made a great efforts for this contest indeed. From this experience of contest, I realized that the team spirit is necessary for all kinds of group.

I have decided to study Foreign Applied Language after graduating from vocational high school. From now on, I'll not fool around any more because I have fallen behind others too much. In order to make my ideal goal come true, I think I have to switch into high gear to take pains studying hard. I'll go all out in the Entrance Examination in order to enter my ideal college.

7 Comments:

At 10:06 PM , Blogger Phoebe Lee said...

嗯,簡潔有力。
學經歴可以再寫多一點。

 
At 10:42 AM , Blogger 邱秀珍 said...

沒什麼錯
第三段應該要多一些高中生涯的介紹

 
At 10:48 AM , Blogger 邱暐心 said...

WOW!
I don’t know you can play the Pianica.
You are so 厲害.

 
At 11:09 AM , Blogger 薪雯 said...

找不到什麼問題!!

 
At 11:25 AM , Blogger Sally Sun said...

we participated in a music contest

我覺得高中地方可以多一點

excellent!I believe you can make it.

 
At 11:28 AM , Blogger Vivian said...

Foreign Applied Language
=> applied foreign language 好像順一點

 
At 11:35 AM , Blogger Penny said...

I think there is no mistake.

 

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