Thursday, June 07, 2007

Computer - draft two

Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They have already been widely used, such as at home, in industries, in education, in searches, and many other fields recently. We use them to gain entertainment, such as playing on-line games, watching films, and so on. We use them to collect the information we need. Furthermore, the appliance of computers offered experts a useful tool to do certain professional tasks; for instance, they are operated to draw a blueprint, to control machines, and many other things. Undoubtedly, the computer has had a tremendous influence on civilization since it was developed.

Personally, I have a liking for computers. Because of them, our lives really become more convenient. For example, we can use it to pay the bill instead of going to bank. Moreover, they have shortened the distance between countries and countries, even cultures and cultures. Additionally, we release stress by playing computer games. It goes without saying that computers are necessary to human beings.

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At 2:29 PM , Blogger gimliong said...

Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They have already been widely used, such as at home, in industries, in education, in searches, and many other fields recently. We use them to gain entertainment, such as playing on-line games, watching films, and so on. We use them to collect the information we need. Furthermore, the appliance of computers offered experts a useful tool to do certain professional tasks; for instance, they are operated to draw a blueprint, to control machines, and many other things. Undoubtedly, the computer has had a tremendous influence on civilization since it was developed.

Personally, I have a liking for computers. Because of them, our lives really become more convenient. For example, we can use it to pay the bill instead of going to bank. Moreover, they have shortened the distance between countries and countries, even cultures and cultures. Additionally, we release stress by playing computer games. It goes without saying that computers are necessary to human beings.



* 第二段是描述個人"我"的情形,似乎又寫回到第一段一般狀況,內容完全偏離主題句。

 

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