Translation - draft two

Choosing television programs carefully is significant. Though the television is the most significant channel to provide information and entertainment, it probably has some disadvantages. Some television programs which are full of violence and lust have a harmful impact on teenagers. Spending too much time watching television show also does harm to eyesight; therefore, we should choose some programs which are beneficial for body and mind. Most of all, not to be a couch potato.

I always live a diligent school. Since I have been a senior high school student, I am expected to be at college. Furthermore the College Board is a keen competition; therefore, I'm forced to study day and night. Day after day, the heavy academic burden weighed me down . That's the reason why I am industrious not only at school but also at home. In addition, all my favorite extracurricular activities are abandoned under pressure. Hopefully I can live a colorful school life.

Translation - draft one

One

Choosing television programs carefully is important. Though the television is the most important channel to provide information and entertainment, it probably has some disadvantages. Some television programs which are full of violence and lust have some bad influence on teenagers. Spending too much time watching television also would do harm to eyesight; therefore, we should choose some programs which are good to our body. All in all, the most important thing is not to be a couch potato.


Two

I have been living in a busy school. Since I have become a senior high school student, I am expected to enter a university, and the college boards are really a fierce competition; therefore, I was forced to study day and night. Everyday, my mind was weighed down with the heavy classwork. That's the reason why I have been busy not only at school but also at home. Besides, I gave up all my favorite extracurricular activities under pressure. Hopefully I can live in a colorful school life.

The Change of Jack - Draft Two

Jack is a senior high school student. Three days ago, he didn't do well on his exams, thanks to the high developed technology, his father received his report card soon after. At the moment Jack got home, he felt a sense of anxiety while his father was looking at his report card concernedly. By his side, Jack stood quietly and did not want to explain why he got terrible grades. He did not have prepared well for the exam; instead, he played on-line games all nigh long before the exam. He didn't feel sorry until he saw an expression of disappointed on his father's face. Gradually, he repented and decided not to fool around any more because he has found that he has fallen behind others too much. Then , he said to his father that he will switch into high gear to study harder, and let his parents be proud of him. Finally, his father seemed to be moved by his son's words.

The Change of Jack - Draft One

Jack is a senior high school student. Three days ago, he didn't do well on his exams, thanks to the high developed technology, his father received his record card soon after. Jack's father looked at Jack's report card concernedly. By his side, Jack stood quietly and did not want to explain why he got terrible grades. He did not have prepared well for the exam; instead, he played on-line games all nigh long before the exam. He didn't feel sorry until he saw a expression of disappointed on his father's face. From then on, he decided not fool around any more because he has found that he has fallen behind others too much. Then , he said to his father that he will switch into high gear to study harder, and let his parents be proud of him. His father seemed to be moved by his son's words.

Tips for Staying Healthy - Draft Two

To keep our health in a nice condition is really important for all of the people. Recently, more and more people think "Health is better than wealth." It means we can take everything away, such as eating, dressing, living and transportation, but we can't take away our health. Without health, we can do nothing. Let me show you some tips for staying health! First, always be in a good mood. The pressure of modern life is the main reason makes us anxious. Second, having enough sleep. By the way, don't eat food before we go to bed in three hours, it's harmful to the stomach. Third, doing exercise regularly. Strengthening the muscle can support our body well. Finally, eating food which is healthy for our body. Take vegetables and fruit for example, they are full of fiber and vitamins, and they are helpful for us to egest the egesta. Furthermore, remember to avoid having junk food! Follow the tips, you can get healthier easily.